Good Job Dragon but I agree with Akon. Could have been great. Needs more team play. Close up action would have been nice of team members in action from a 3rd view point. Some kills should have been slowed down a bit. To be honest, it a looks a bit hectic. The section with everyone's comments runs way to fast. There is no way for anyone to even have time for people to read what was written. Or for that matter, even know who Tom was.
And btw Pikelet, I do believe that is the correct date Although why dragon changes the style from 01/01/2010 to 2010/01/01 is beyond me